Saturday 9 July 2011

The Bird Garden

Welcome to the Xeroversary! From Sun 3rd July to Sat 9th July we celebrated 1 year of the Xeroverse with guest flash fiction posted every day. Join the festivities, enjoy the fiction, say hi. =)

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The Bird Garden

by Dee Harding


Pleione is a nymph. She is maybe Indian, maybe Chinese. Her name is Greek. It goes up at the end, like her nose. Like her glasses when they slide down. She spends a lot of time reading, writing, staring up at the stars. She tends a small garden, cramped with orchids, and she names things. Not the flowers: They proliferate and change faster that anyone can count.

Sometimes she leaves her garden to search for secondhand books, and she knows now that even Darwin gave up, back in 1862. There are more than twice the number of different orchids than there are different birds, and she can barely keep up with the birds. Still, she catalogues the avian content of her garden, listens to their song, peacocks and all, and writes letters.

A long time ago, much longer ago than you would guess from how she looks, she had daughters. It is a sad and tiring story, but it comes down to this: The constellations are graveyards for those most adored by the gods. It is her lover that holds them up.

So Pleione writes letters. The birds carry them to the highest heights, to the pillars of the world. Her catalogue records each and every one in their flight. She copies out what she sends, and takes dictation from her winged companions on their return. In moments of extreme loneliness she plucks an orchid from the earth, grinds the twin bulbs to flour, and combines the powder with milk and the vanilla she grows. The brew is a powerful aphrodisiac. It sends her into dreams of how her daughters were made. Her own hands become those of Atlas. He lifts her up, and it is like it was before he took every burning orb into his reach, before Pleione was left alone.

There are other types of orchids in the garden. Orchids that would kill Pleione within the hour. But she has been promised a place in the night sky. It is a threat, that she will become a burning thing in the cold, and her weight will add to Atlas’ burden.

Instead she tends her garden. She labels birds. It is a kind of quiet resistance. It will last forever.


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Dee Harding used to be an urban legend, but worked out a little bit, and can now touch things and push furniture around. You can find more of Dee's work at deeandmeghan.tumblr.com, but it's almost impossible to know where it comes from. Maybe French speaking Canada, maybe the Atlantic, maybe Norfolk... semi-retired myths are tough to pin down.

Xero says: Time past, Dee and I collaborated on a flash fiction project called Hidden Tracks. We would critique each other’s work and his influence on my writing, both conceptually and structurally, is undeniable.

3 comments:

  1. Exquisite. I was drawn in from the first word, from how to say her name, and there simply wasn't a wrong word in the piece. Just gorgeous.

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  2. This piece has a number of fun twists of phrases. I really liked "It goes up at the end, like her nose." because of the comic timing of the delivery and how it touches in the next line with her overall character.

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  3. Thank you so much. Especially for the link through! I'm very happy to have been an influence on our host, and even happier to offer up the last song of the evening.

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