The year is 2032. This
is the City, centre of world politics.
She hadn’t slept in four days. The floor of the room was
littered with cans of energy drink, all empty; she held the last in her hands
and they were shaking too much for her to open it. She would have to move on,
whoever owned this place might come looking, whoever was after her might come
looking.
Whoever was after her...
She should know that, but everything was confusing, conflicting. Her head hurt,
inside and out.
Sleep was the enemy. Sleep was full of horrible things,
nightmares like memories, impossible imagery. There were other enemies, but
sleep was the hardest to keep at bay. The longer she evaded it, the closer it
got, until it crept into her vision unbidden, with dirty hallucinations and
blood-slick visions.
Her eyelids fluttered as she slid sideways a little and
jerked back. The room twitched, the green-grey carpet became a muddy field
strewn with corpses, their lifeless eyes gaping upwards, bile and blood and mud
mixed across their faces like some demonic child’s colouring book, with no
regard for the lines.
She slapped herself, hard, twice.
“Stay awake, stay awake, stay a-fucking-wake.”
She had to figure it out. That was what she did, right?
The room swam, darkness coiled about the sides of her vision.
Why would the dead not leave her alone? Why had she killed so many? Didn’t
she stop that kind of thing? Wasn’t that her job? Was it? She couldn’t even
remember her name.
She felt paralysed, unable to move more than a shudder as
dead things snuggled up to her. A skeletal arm curled across her waist, tattered
edges of greening meat hanging from it like ragged clothes. A rib cage pressed
against her for comfort and warmth. A skull settled beside her head, facing
her, chattering cold nothings into her ear.
****
The General stared blankly at his cell wall. He was a model
prisoner, he never made a fuss, he never did much of anything, just smiled
his infuriating, oblivious smile.
****
Beneath a bright strip light in the warehouse district four
heavyset men waited while a fifth, bigger man buzzed the intercom. The problem
with modern technology, they often agreed, was that it made the night too
bright. They liked the old movies, where this same scene would have taken place
beneath a blinking, yellow lamp, the flickering glow caught on wreaths of
cigarette smoke.
None of these men were smoking, not here, on a public street
where they might draw the unwanted attention of the law.
They were thugs, men of violence, and they would have
revelled in fitting the old stereotype; they would happily have worn it like a
badge of office, but for the fact it might impede their job in unnecessary
ways. They liked efficiency. For example, why carry a weapon when your fists
can do the job; there’s never been a law against fists.
“Who’s this keeping us waiting, Munch?”
Munch, short for Munchkin, was the absurdly large man at the
buzzer. He knew better than to buzz twice and it was insight, not his size,
that put him in charge. He had heard of the man they were meeting, and he knew
impatience on their part would do nothing to ingratiate them.
“They call him the Siberian.”
“I hate Russians.”
“I don’t think he’s actually from Siberia, Fingers.”
Fingers’ main topic of conversation was usually what to do
were someone to find themselves in an interrogating situation, and where might
be the best place to start.
“So why call him that?”
“Why call me Munchkin? It’s supposed to be ironic, ain’t it.
On account of the Siberian landscape being so icy, snowy, and generally white
and him being so–”
The door opened, a man’s eyes glinted dangerously from the
shadows within.
I like the thugs. I'm curious where this is going to go.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Aidan, the thugs weren't part of the original game plan, but they kind of appeared and I quite like them too. =)
ReplyDeleteAs with all of the serials, this is something of an experiment in storytelling. I hope people like where it goes. =)
The characters have piqued my interest, and I sense a little marbling of humour running through this too. Looking forward to watching it develop.
ReplyDeleteI am completely intrigued, firstly with the girl in the first part - all sorts of questions going through my head, and secondly with the thugs. I will look forward to seeing how this develops John. Your writing as always is excellent.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Steve. I definitely had some fun writing this, in with the serious.
ReplyDeleteThanks so much, Helen. =)
I am incredibly curious about the girl. Why has she killed, has she killed, and what is her "job"? Can't wait to find out! :)
ReplyDeleteI also agree with everyone about the thugs. I love the banter.
Yes, the thug banter was well-done. Three threads are begun, the braiding promises to be fascinating.
ReplyDeleteOne typo: an excess "had" in Why had she had killed so many?
Verification word: "coldor" — not the Siberian, then.
Thanks, Zaiure. I kinda like the thugs too, particularly because they came from nowhere as I was writing. =)
ReplyDeleteThank you, FAR. I think I chopped that paragraph around a fair bit, missed that. I love it when a verification seems somehow apt. =)
Awesome beginning! I look forward to following the story. I liked the desperate fear you were able to evoke with the girl, the unsettling oddity of The General and the relatable (if violent) thugs.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Andrew. =)
DeleteI hope you like the rest. =)