tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7554146478001236835.post7988763689918406554..comments2023-05-25T10:03:20.236+01:00Comments on Xeroverse: John Xero: The Dorothy Delusion - part 4John Xerohttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17492709629314280633noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7554146478001236835.post-73938451542666583242011-12-30T20:38:11.130+00:002011-12-30T20:38:11.130+00:00Thanks, FAR. She's trained to the point of ins...Thanks, FAR. She's trained to the point of instinct, formidable even when delusional. =)<br /><br />Thank you, Helen. =)John Xerohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17492709629314280633noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7554146478001236835.post-26306380171523628252011-12-28T09:11:52.300+00:002011-12-28T09:11:52.300+00:00Dorothy is one tough lady! I liked the cleverness ...Dorothy is one tough lady! I liked the cleverness of the Scarecrow and how he outsmarted them.Helen A. Howellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12748128819820230841noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7554146478001236835.post-79699385385320827122011-12-27T13:53:06.410+00:002011-12-27T13:53:06.410+00:00Dorothy is able to get the better of two large men...Dorothy is able to get the better of two large men, then slide down a six-story building? Not someone I'd want to meet in a dark alley then! ;-) Still, I hope she makes it home.<br /><br />Sounds like the General is the one without a brain, but we already have the Scarecrow.Larry Kollarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08317037795075278427noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7554146478001236835.post-68482392216010523622011-12-27T07:48:27.607+00:002011-12-27T07:48:27.607+00:00Thank you, Aidan. =)
Thanks, Steve. No, although ...Thank you, Aidan. =)<br /><br />Thanks, Steve. No, although I like that idea. =)<br /><br />Thank you, Pete. Dorothy's a tough gal but this might be a bit much, even for her.<br /><br />Interesting thought isn't it? If you were to separate the two, is the body guilty of the mind's crimes? Are the two implicitly complicit? ;)John Xerohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17492709629314280633noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7554146478001236835.post-77385002207503843892011-12-25T21:57:24.855+00:002011-12-25T21:57:24.855+00:00Another slice of the good stuff. I'm worried a...Another slice of the good stuff. I'm worried about Dorothy, I think she's going to need a hell of a lot of therapy after this is over...<br /><br />I also like the idea of the general being 'innocent' of his crimes. It raises interesting issues about what's really us and what satisfies in terms of justice.Peter Newmanhttp://www.runpetewrite.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7554146478001236835.post-10305324637934783752011-12-24T18:13:47.473+00:002011-12-24T18:13:47.473+00:00More great imaginative writing, Dorothy is a very ...More great imaginative writing, Dorothy is a very interesting character indeed. If I have interpreted correctly she is imagining these events? Or her imagination is causing the events to become real?Steve Greenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18414279461366098783noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7554146478001236835.post-13666975837214686462011-12-23T16:35:47.386+00:002011-12-23T16:35:47.386+00:00I really like how you capture the cyber-ness and p...I really like how you capture the cyber-ness and privacy issues in the Scarecrow segment. Also, the double-blind hidey hole was a nice clever little addition. Intriguing addition that moves us forward and keeps us hooked for next week.<br /><br />Thanks for the rec!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14170148559429001125noreply@blogger.com