tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7554146478001236835.post2855745106984478679..comments2023-05-25T10:03:20.236+01:00Comments on Xeroverse: John Xero: Worship and RuinJohn Xerohttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17492709629314280633noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7554146478001236835.post-62179838394880889662011-05-01T18:11:55.732+01:002011-05-01T18:11:55.732+01:00Thanks, Stephen. I feel quite sorry for the world ...Thanks, Stephen. I feel quite sorry for the world outside the church... I think the protagonist may have not got such a bad deal, in all...John Xerohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17492709629314280633noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7554146478001236835.post-12184835157750109372011-05-01T12:29:39.199+01:002011-05-01T12:29:39.199+01:00I liked that creeping possession and his out of bo...I liked that creeping possession and his out of body observation of it as it happened, starting with his position of prayer. Great feeling of 'oh dear what's going to happen next'. Nothing good, I'd warrant. Well written. St.Stephenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10111660663883108862noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7554146478001236835.post-43841631192357347532011-04-29T20:38:13.720+01:002011-04-29T20:38:13.720+01:00I think he might, Steve. Thanks for commenting. =)...I think he might, Steve. Thanks for commenting. =)John Xerohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17492709629314280633noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7554146478001236835.post-87642141737190175782011-04-29T19:52:30.222+01:002011-04-29T19:52:30.222+01:00What may answer... there lies the horror within.
...What may answer... there lies the horror within.<br /><br />I think our MC is going to have plenty of time to ponder his folly.Steve Greenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18414279461366098783noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7554146478001236835.post-22739711945347439212011-04-29T19:46:59.899+01:002011-04-29T19:46:59.899+01:00Thanks FAR, I think maybe he's just wishing he...Thanks FAR, I think maybe he's just wishing he had chosen some other place...<br /><br />You're right, Raven, there are too many reasons to count. A lotta ways in a lotta worlds things can go bad for you... (great for us writers of course... ;) )John Xerohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17492709629314280633noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7554146478001236835.post-11799327207835834362011-04-29T19:28:19.864+01:002011-04-29T19:28:19.864+01:00It's dangerous to be alone. And here's a r...It's dangerous to be alone. And here's a reason why.Raven Corinn Carlukhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06014248975870886289noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7554146478001236835.post-39554073576725881872011-04-29T18:19:11.399+01:002011-04-29T18:19:11.399+01:00Oh, this had plenty of kick! I might personally di...Oh, this had plenty of kick! I might personally disagree with the MC's thought about where you worship being more important, but this was well done and captured the moment as tightly as the MC. I hope he can break free and warn his family (or the world?) somehow.Larry Kollarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08317037795075278427noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7554146478001236835.post-4216123049752530582011-04-26T14:34:37.326+01:002011-04-26T14:34:37.326+01:00Thanks Aidan, that's good to hear, I liked the...Thanks Aidan, that's good to hear, I liked the ending but I was worried about its lack of kick, glad you liked it too. =)John Xerohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17492709629314280633noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7554146478001236835.post-88392052289481711662011-04-26T02:17:55.927+01:002011-04-26T02:17:55.927+01:00I like the question that lingers of where you wors...I like the question that lingers of where you worship being more important than who you worship. Disturbing images you've dredged in this story.AidanFhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09876041003278004627noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7554146478001236835.post-9985129360587809262011-04-25T11:45:15.322+01:002011-04-25T11:45:15.322+01:00Thanks, Daisy. ;)
I should think there are reasons...Thanks, Daisy. ;)<br />I should think there are reasons at least tangentially related to demons, or the Devil, isn't that the point? ;)<br /><br />Thank you, Shelle, and no need to worry, it's all in my head...<br /><br />(had a great Easter, btw, the bits I wasn't working)John Xerohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17492709629314280633noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7554146478001236835.post-31468931263886981422011-04-25T00:17:35.340+01:002011-04-25T00:17:35.340+01:00Those chains are strong, doesn't matter what e...Those chains are strong, doesn't matter what entity they were created by, I guess you can't physically break something that isn't human made... Another wonderful post... hope you have a Happy Easter & this story wasn't the result of a recent event :/Sunshineshellehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02157287671119047031noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7554146478001236835.post-84878061289205956032011-04-24T15:53:15.528+01:002011-04-24T15:53:15.528+01:00Love this one. Love all of them, but this one in p...Love this one. Love all of them, but this one in particular - it was quite captivating. Especially the line "The church was not the place I was promised". I wonder how many people can identify with that? Ok, maybe not through reason directly related to demonic possession, but still. *like*Daisyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08262756133884785243noreply@blogger.com