tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7554146478001236835.post2117774954010778889..comments2023-05-25T10:03:20.236+01:00Comments on Xeroverse: John Xero: Flash Fiction: Ghost, AbandonedJohn Xerohttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17492709629314280633noreply@blogger.comBlogger22125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7554146478001236835.post-4976179455079007852012-07-02T09:21:44.024+01:002012-07-02T09:21:44.024+01:00Thank you, Katherine. =)Thank you, Katherine. =)John Xerohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17492709629314280633noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7554146478001236835.post-55635349672711284322012-07-02T09:21:30.760+01:002012-07-02T09:21:30.760+01:00Thanks, Helen. I really like the characters, so, w...Thanks, Helen. I really like the characters, so, who knows!? =DJohn Xerohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17492709629314280633noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7554146478001236835.post-47483836367125489792012-07-02T09:20:44.468+01:002012-07-02T09:20:44.468+01:00Thank you, Cindy. ^_^Thank you, Cindy. ^_^John Xerohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17492709629314280633noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7554146478001236835.post-62743223609915369742012-07-02T09:20:28.982+01:002012-07-02T09:20:28.982+01:00Thank you, Sonya. Everyone's been pretty encou...Thank you, Sonya. Everyone's been pretty encouraging about this one, maybe I'll try and get my brain to prioritise it for something longer. =)John Xerohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17492709629314280633noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7554146478001236835.post-18231573519741119432012-07-01T20:14:39.791+01:002012-07-01T20:14:39.791+01:00I liked this a lot -- like Helen, I'd like to ...I liked this a lot -- like Helen, I'd like to see more of the world and the conflict.Katherine Hajerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08270232675026751342noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7554146478001236835.post-77344119552946888922012-07-01T04:10:33.660+01:002012-07-01T04:10:33.660+01:00I think this must be one of the best things you...I think this must be one of the best things you've written. It certainly has the potential to be far more than a flash - I hope you consider it.Helen A. Howellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12748128819820230841noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7554146478001236835.post-37711589310445805422012-07-01T02:21:21.220+01:002012-07-01T02:21:21.220+01:00Bloody brilliant story John! I'm speechless af...Bloody brilliant story John! I'm speechless after reading. Great imagination and idea and what a fantastic writing to deliver it.Cindy Vaskovahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06747628778627025130noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7554146478001236835.post-71070992728379961032012-06-30T21:12:53.960+01:002012-06-30T21:12:53.960+01:00The world building and everything else about this ...The world building and everything else about this blew me away! I agree with Larry, I can definitely see this working as a longer story. You've got some really great ideas here.Sonyahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01351929216915547602noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7554146478001236835.post-4925268020616535402012-06-30T14:28:48.266+01:002012-06-30T14:28:48.266+01:00Thank you, Pete. ^_^
In the hands of devious play...Thank you, Pete. ^_^<br /><br />In the hands of devious players there are many, many exploitable powers. GMing is no easy task! =)John Xerohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17492709629314280633noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7554146478001236835.post-91541038447889656422012-06-30T13:59:14.843+01:002012-06-30T13:59:14.843+01:00Now this I like! Brimming with cool concepts while...Now this I like! Brimming with cool concepts while remaining accessible.<br /><br />Ghosting powers are always broken, which is why they should never be given to players in RPG's. Won't make that mistake again!Peter Newmanhttp://www.runpetewrite.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7554146478001236835.post-35509052453028735292012-06-30T13:39:27.974+01:002012-06-30T13:39:27.974+01:00Thank you, Steve. =)Thank you, Steve. =)John Xerohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17492709629314280633noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7554146478001236835.post-7047919751260862892012-06-30T13:34:36.448+01:002012-06-30T13:34:36.448+01:00It's one I would like to go back to some time,...It's one I would like to go back to some time, Larry. So many things to work on though... so little time. =(<br /><br />I think another key tension would be Scorpion's primary purpose, crossed with a lack of bullets. Would Scorpion himself become dissatisfied without being able to actually shoot anything...?John Xerohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17492709629314280633noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7554146478001236835.post-48104363354963658332012-06-30T03:55:07.440+01:002012-06-30T03:55:07.440+01:00Upon a second reading, I could see this becoming a...Upon a second reading, I could see this becoming a novella or maybe a full novel. She would have to find out why the Lords have abandoned her before she can get home. And could Scorpion refuse to return for very long? Hmmm.Larry Kollarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08317037795075278427noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7554146478001236835.post-87598411695473626302012-06-29T20:11:39.617+01:002012-06-29T20:11:39.617+01:00Brilliant imagery and imaginative writing John, ab...Brilliant imagery and imaginative writing John, absolutely fantastic sci-fi.Steve Greenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18414279461366098783noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7554146478001236835.post-19369327414702149032012-06-29T19:13:27.554+01:002012-06-29T19:13:27.554+01:00Ah, but how will she keep Scorpion happy now that ...Ah, but how will she keep Scorpion happy now that he can't go killin', so much... ;)<br /><br />Thank you, John. =)John Xerohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17492709629314280633noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7554146478001236835.post-24025905457531872082012-06-29T19:10:16.243+01:002012-06-29T19:10:16.243+01:00Thanks, Larry. =DThanks, Larry. =DJohn Xerohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17492709629314280633noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7554146478001236835.post-42516937863027715882012-06-29T19:09:57.776+01:002012-06-29T19:09:57.776+01:00Thank you, Icy. ^_^
No plans right now, but it...Thank you, Icy. ^_^<br /><br />No plans right now, but it's one that will definitely sit on the back burner. Would love to expand it some time...John Xerohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17492709629314280633noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7554146478001236835.post-25166604415101400352012-06-29T19:08:35.715+01:002012-06-29T19:08:35.715+01:00Thanks, Adam. =)Thanks, Adam. =)John Xerohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17492709629314280633noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7554146478001236835.post-79943316539522569022012-06-29T16:13:55.842+01:002012-06-29T16:13:55.842+01:00A psychic gun would be very handy, even if I can&#...A psychic gun would be very handy, even if I can't stop giggling at it.John Wiswellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07416044628686736927noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7554146478001236835.post-85738547182481139392012-06-29T15:33:55.066+01:002012-06-29T15:33:55.066+01:00Wild and wow-inducing as always!Wild and wow-inducing as always!Larry Kollarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08317037795075278427noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7554146478001236835.post-71368194272089732372012-06-29T09:04:51.614+01:002012-06-29T09:04:51.614+01:00Wow, that was astonishing! Any plans to expand thi...Wow, that was astonishing! Any plans to expand this?Icy Sedgwickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11501193571425442406noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7554146478001236835.post-51741916487496133702012-06-29T09:00:44.258+01:002012-06-29T09:00:44.258+01:00What a cool set up, moving and shifting between re...What a cool set up, moving and shifting between realms to combat your opponent.<br />Adam B @revhappinessAdam Bhttp://afullnessinbrevity.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.com